Friday, March 23, 2007

E-Cover Letter Revamp

I need help with my cover letter because its BAD because I don't have any experience in writing cover letters; however, I asked someone in a message board what's wrong with it and she said that I should get rid of the second paragraph, but I'm not sure if I should do it because I've seen examples of cover letters on other websites and those cover letters have three paragraphs; not two. Also, she said that I should condense the first and last paragraphs, but how do I condense them? By the way, my cover letter is for the web designer occupation.

To understand what I'm asking, here's my cover letter: Continued reading...

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